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Monday, 25 August 2014

Monument Hill


   

WALT create a piece of writing that inspires your reader
  to visit a place you love to go.

2 comments:

  1. I like how you paint a vivid picture of the people in your class. You give a unique and amusing perspective and make the reader feel like a kid again. You need to read your work careful before you post so you remove any errors and your work makes perfect sense. Work on your editing skills for next time.

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    1. Thank you for commenting Miss Nicola. I will work on my on my editing skills next time.

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