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Friday, 12 September 2014

The house

WALT : Use varied sentence beginnings and lengths. I think I did well describing what it looks like and and varying my length. I think I need to vary my sentence beginnings.

The wood was broken & a little bit rusty. Shattered glass lay in the parched grass. The door handles were nowhere to be seen & the door lay on a cut tree trunk. More wood lay in the grass, but was leaning against the cut tree trunk. A few trees lay on the grass covered in moss. Eventually rats & mice made their homes in the walls There were no machines . Walls were covered with mud. The ground was covered in grass, ripped newspaper & mud(too). Rats scurried everywhere, searching for food; the rats would squeak or show it’s teeth if it saw something coming towards it(to scare the thing away).

Personal details

   

I've been learning about why I shouldn't give out my personal details.
I think I did well with the pictures and information.
I also think that I should add a little more details.

Monday, 8 September 2014

Sock puppets

         

WALT write explanations.
I think I did well writing the explanation.
I think I should do better at adding more cause and effect words.

Monday, 25 August 2014

Monument Hill


   

WALT create a piece of writing that inspires your reader
  to visit a place you love to go.

Thursday, 21 August 2014

Wednesday, 6 August 2014

Tuesday, 5 August 2014

Friday, 1 August 2014

Summer


W.A.L.T use other authors as teachers.
What I did well is...
Starting with remember the time.
Extend on the opening sentence.
Writing you instead of I.
Writing about my memories &
ending with a closing sentence







Wednesday, 30 July 2014

Maths Reflection


Today I practiced my multiplication. I scored 50 in 1 minute and 42 seconds. My goal is to rememeber my multiplacation facts.